I've read this story and it was really interesting. Like I said, it's very difficult to have and use such writing power - to be specially limited in working space and to show us the whole life of this couple - Dorothy and Randell. And moreover, it's difficult to judge their actions, because both of them were right in some things. The Man just wanted to make a real rich living for his "wife" and be calm 'cause of her stability. The Woman just wanted to be with her beloved, with the man of Blossom and Eternal Energy. but not with this transformed gray object. And I should say, that of course the theme of raising of women in the modern society if the lead one, but she did a critical mistake - she was as a color pony in the world of her happy dreams, and couldn't see another world. World of everyday tragedies, problems. And she really could see this side of their relationships and to prevent some bad things.
Well done!
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